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poem for my girlfriend
aznguy711
post Jan 24 2005, 11:22 PM
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ok, im not a very creative person, i just get my moments of creativity and this was one of them. i was in english thinking about my girlfriend and suddenly just started writing and came up with this, o and her name is Tram Anh Bui, in viet u jus sey that last name first..

Without her there is nothing

The cloudy skies have parted,
There’s nothing left to see,
The sun is clear and magnificent,
Yet there’s no one here with me,

I thought that there’d be no one,
How very wrong I was,
For I have found my soul mate,
Her name is Bui Tram Anh.

I love her more than anything,
I’d give my life for her,
Cause without her there is nothing,
No life, no love, no peace.

I hope I never lose her,
Without her there is nothing,
I promise I’ll love her always,
Until the end of our time.

When the mighty sea dries up,
When the bluest skies turn grey,
I’ll still be here standing,
With open arms,
To give her a long lasting hug,
Until my arms grow weak and weary,
I’ll always be there for her and she’ll always be mine.

Without her there is nothing,
Because she’s everything I need.




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cewinee
post Jan 26 2005, 03:07 PM
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shes gona go crazy when reads that hahah omg great!!

btw if anyone makes any stupid ass remarks about ur poem.. lemme know ill fcking kick their ass!!!!!!! mad.gif


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