Shattered, Poem |
 Jan 25 2005, 07:24 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes  Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967  |
Shattered
By: Savannah Harrison Love becomes a mirror, A reflection of your withered soul. There's nothing there but just a shell, And your loneliness is metallic... Cold Slam a fist into your being, Fragile, breakable; Like a porcelain doll. Watch you crumble Watch you fall. What you craved has shattered, So just shatter. Rain your regret down upon my appearance, Bleed my tale-tell smile dry, Tear me apart with your broken glass. And perhaps our jagged pieces... Can someday become one. |
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Jan 26 2005, 10:47 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
"tale-tell"? isn't it "tell-tale"?
you're improving, no doubt about it. *thumbs up* never give up. |
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Sa-Chan Shattered Jan 25 2005, 07:24 PM
aznxdreamer i like it. Jan 26 2005, 11:55 PM stephinika nice. i really like these lines:
QUOTESlam a fist... Jan 27 2005, 12:56 AM Wishful_Dream I really liked it.. =) keep writing =P Jan 30 2005, 12:14 AM xtransatlanticismx pretty nice, i like it Jan 30 2005, 12:30 AM
smthngcrprategrl34 its good Jan 30 2005, 12:56 PM |
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