why does she, by Marcy |
 Jan 24 2005, 05:08 PM
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i wrote this a while ago when i was really pissed off. umm i guess its oaky.. i'm not good at writting LOL
anyways here it is why does she written by Marcy why does she get to see you and i get left behind in this cold world i've waited years for someone like you and now i might lose you why does he get to see you why do the roses of spring get to see you more then i do why am i left behind don't i deserve one special thing between you and i. instead i get left with my paper cut out heart that have torn cut out edges. the blood rushes through my mind, i dont belong in your life anymore No where to go, no where to hide all i want to do is crawl up in a ball and hide from the cold ass world f**k everyone, f**k love, f**k the world why does she get to see you why do i get left behind, all i want is to be happy, i dont want to look in the mirror anymore, i just wanna break it and watch my blood fall slowly onto the ground sometimes... i hate you. the end |
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Jan 25 2005, 08:32 PM
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nicely done. i like it though its a tad cliche, but still well done. good job.
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