I hate the way...., a new poem, please leave comments! Options

[LostInMyKryptoni...]

I hate the way…



I hate the way you never call

I hate the way you never write

I hate the way you look at me

And how your always right

I hate the way you’d hug me

And the way you’d stare

I hate the way you’d laugh at me

But always seem to care

I hate that look in your eye

The one you’d always get

When you would just hold me

And tell me every thing you meant

I hate the way you’d hold me

And the way you’d kiss

I hate all the stupid things

That I'd seem to miss

But what I hate most of all

Is what I said I’d never do

I hate the way you tripped me

So I’d fall in love with you

Now let me make this very clear

And tell you what is true

I hate the way you broke my wall

And how I still love you


LeKeyshia Marie Richardson

©2005 LeKeyshia Marie Richardson


i wrote this because i wanted to tell this guy i still love that i hate it how ...etc, but yet i still love him, i havn't given it to him yet, dont know if i will.... well please tell me what ya'll think! thanks!

[*stephinika*]

well done. i like the concept though it seems almost cliche to me but i like how you wrote it. good job.