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I hate the way...., a new poem, please leave comments!
LostInMyKryptoni...
post Jan 23 2005, 09:38 PM
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I hate the way…



I hate the way you never call

I hate the way you never write

I hate the way you look at me

And how your always right

I hate the way you’d hug me

And the way you’d stare

I hate the way you’d laugh at me

But always seem to care

I hate that look in your eye

The one you’d always get

When you would just hold me

And tell me every thing you meant

I hate the way you’d hold me

And the way you’d kiss

I hate all the stupid things

That I'd seem to miss

But what I hate most of all

Is what I said I’d never do

I hate the way you tripped me

So I’d fall in love with you

Now let me make this very clear

And tell you what is true

I hate the way you broke my wall

And how I still love you


LeKeyshia Marie Richardson

©2005 LeKeyshia Marie Richardson


i wrote this because i wanted to tell this guy i still love that i hate it how ...etc, but yet i still love him, i havn't given it to him yet, dont know if i will.... sad.gif well please tell me what ya'll think! thanks!
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Jan 24 2005, 06:24 PM
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lol i like it! it reminds me of that movie "10 things i hate about you" lol, you should see it, it's good.
 
TreesTurnMeOn
post Jan 24 2005, 07:32 PM
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QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Jan 24 2005, 6:24 PM)
lol i like it! it reminds me of that movie "10 things i hate about you" lol, you should see it, it's good.
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Same. But it was really good. I liked it happy.gif
 

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LostInMyKryptonite   I hate the way....   Jan 23 2005, 09:38 PM
xxruinedsoulxx   this is wonderful   Jan 23 2005, 09:49 PM
KissMe2408   lol i like it! it reminds me of that movie ...   Jan 24 2005, 06:24 PM
TreesTurnMeOn   QUOTE(KissMe2408 @ Jan 24 2005, 6:24 PM)lol i...   Jan 24 2005, 07:32 PM
dahding   pretty good. reminds me also of that movie, ten th...   Jan 24 2005, 07:45 PM
Gypsy Eyes   wow i love it. i can totally relate   Jan 24 2005, 08:23 PM
stephinika   well done. i like the concept though it seems almo...   Jan 24 2005, 08:27 PM
LostInMyKryptonite   wow i'm really glad everyone likes it, i meant...   Jan 25 2005, 04:26 PM
RiddleMeWonders   I can relate... But yeah, I like how you maintaine...   Jan 25 2005, 04:39 PM
IamRad   wow i almost cried..that was so sweet, and i can p...   Jan 28 2005, 09:02 PM
Outloved   Very nice job. I like how it's written, made p...   Jan 28 2005, 10:27 PM
LostInMyKryptonite   wow i'm pleased with all the positive feedback...   Jan 28 2005, 10:52 PM
sheepy   woww i love it. loved the ending so deep.   Jan 30 2005, 12:13 PM
smthngcrprategrl34   i love it! and i know exactly what ur feeling   Jan 30 2005, 12:47 PM
sporadic   Seems a little too cliche for me, but it's nic...   Jan 30 2005, 09:05 PM
actionrobot_go   In my opinion, which you probably don't want, ...   Jan 30 2005, 09:13 PM
LostInMyKryptonite   QUOTEIn my opinion, which you probably don't w...   Jan 31 2005, 04:43 PM
actionrobot_go   this is only the internet. it wasn't a persona...   Jan 31 2005, 05:27 PM
LostInMyKryptonite   yeah were cool, sorry i just get really defensive ...   Feb 1 2005, 09:20 PM


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