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[TreesTurnMeOn]

I wrote this while my dad was busy telling mom how stupid i was write in front of my face

I try and walk away from your stupid psychodelic sherade (sp?)
Because all the love in your face quickly fades
You scream harsh words;be quiet, I already heard
How I am stupid and worthless and utterly absurd

Locked in my room, I look back and reflect
How Your harsh words scarred me through neglect
Put on your fake image and let's pretend
That our tragic dilemma has come to an end

Nothing became of this cause they believe we live in bliss
And you won't accept the fact that your completely horendous (sp?)
Run off;slam the door while I'm face down on the floor
They'll imagine that I just fell once more

Locked in my room, I look back and reflect
How Your harsh words scarred me through neglect
Put on your fake image and let's pretend
That our tragic dilemma has come to an end

These tears in my eyes;the black bruises on my thighs
Are merely the result of failed tries
To kill your daughter;your attempted man slaughter
But its all concealed by the material things you bought her

Locked in my room, I look back and reflect
How Your harsh words scarred me through neglect
Put on your fake image and let's pretend
That our tragic dilemma has come to an end

Comments and CONSTRUCTIVE criticism wanted and needed

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

dayum homie good choice of words and uhhhm i like the rhyming but
this part of ur writing is kinda dont make sense to me

When you lock me in my room I have to reflect
The harsh words you've thrown and pierced my neck
So go put on the fake family image and let's pretend
That our dramatic epidimic has come to an end

id kinda rewrite it like this

locked in my room i look back and reflect
your harsh words scarred me through my neglect
put on your fake image and lets pretend
that our false bond between us has fall to and end