rap competition, no freestyle anymore. Options

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A mod can close the other topic "freestyle competition" because datru was right..that wasnt freestyling..and there's a difference between freestyle and rap, so new clean topic here. RAP COMPETITION.

NEW RULES//: The First 3 Posts Of Their Rap Lyrics, I will read and I will decide who had the best one. FIRST 3

Datru Katalyst is the second judge because i said so lol

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Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight

i didn't like that rhyming, no offense. constructive criticism fact 1: using the same letters unk too much. i dont like it. jordan's lines own this whole verse.

i like how everyones just changing the words and making these raps up while if any rapper actually used it with the right beat, theyd be millionaires.

as for me, im cuban and i dont play like that, ya hurd?! XD

LOL! hahahahaha, changing the words.... nahhh... so far, i dont see any that many good lines here so i doubt this kind of rhyming can make them millionares.