silent nights Options

[xtransatlanticis...]

i want
cool fall nights;
the soggy leaves
painted redgoldbrown and
smoky night fires
and the tingle
of light breezes.

i want
to walk through these back alleys that are
backlit
by fluorescent orange
manmade constellations
i want to walk
with your hand in mine.

i want
wet streets
and leaves that dance
with interlocked hands,
falling calmly
in the calm fall,
and silent,
silent
nights.

[ryfitaDF]

i give props to you for using the word "soggy". hehe. i like it. it's very romantic and visual. and i relate to it, somewhat. i'm also kind of inspired to write a somber, quiet song of my own, now. nice work!