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Jan 17 2005, 02:10 PM
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i am a liar ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,216 |
i want
cool fall nights; the soggy leaves painted redgoldbrown and smoky night fires and the tingle of light breezes. i want to walk through these back alleys that are backlit by fluorescent orange manmade constellations i want to walk with your hand in mine. i want wet streets and leaves that dance with interlocked hands, falling calmly in the calm fall, and silent, silent nights. |
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Jan 18 2005, 09:57 AM
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i'm susan ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow that was amazingly beautiful!! hehe while i was reading your poem, i was imagining me in that poem. felt so refeshing i have to say that hehe. sound so breezy and very warmy ^___^;; great job!!!
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xtransatlanticismx silent nights Jan 17 2005, 02:10 PM
KissMe2408 that was awesome your words and your style is ve... Jan 18 2005, 02:56 AM
ryfitaDF i give props to you for using the word "soggy... Jan 18 2005, 10:57 AM![]() ![]() |