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silent nights
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post Jan 17 2005, 02:10 PM
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i want
cool fall nights;
the soggy leaves
painted redgoldbrown and
smoky night fires
and the tingle
of light breezes.

i want
to walk through these back alleys that are
backlit
by fluorescent orange
manmade constellations
i want to walk
with your hand in mine.

i want
wet streets
and leaves that dance
with interlocked hands,
falling calmly
in the calm fall,
and silent,
silent
nights.
 
 
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angel-roh
post Jan 18 2005, 09:57 AM
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wow that was amazingly beautiful!! hehe while i was reading your poem, i was imagining me in that poem. felt so refeshing i have to say that hehe. sound so breezy and very warmy ^___^;; great job!!!

thumbsup.gif i'll give you 100000000000000000000000/10 cause it's really good!
 

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