You, a sweet/sad little poem |
 Jan 9 2005, 05:04 PM
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When my world was charcoaled black, You gave me inspiration to get on track, The conforting words you talked me through, I guess I believed that they were true, The powers you have to make me smile, But the happiness... it's been a while, Looking at you, seeing your soft warm eyes, How they've changed, now all I see are lies, The ways you've hurt me, like you don't care, The goodness I got out of you, the things I bear, You don't know how much I've lost, You said you'd do anything, no matter the cost, But now I know, my life is so low, I've tried to be strong, tried to free myself of woe, But for some reason I can't, I've forgotten your faithful chant, It's so clear now, there's nothing I can do, All I ever needed... was you. Okay, so it's not great... but what do you expect from a 12 year old? |
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Jan 17 2005, 03:27 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
That's so deep I love it
 
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azn hunni xox You Jan 9 2005, 05:04 PM
ryfitaDF i like it. easy to relate to. keep up the good wor... Jan 10 2005, 01:22 AM MyVermilionPlague Ooh. Pretty good!
I like it.
Nice job. [= Jan 11 2005, 05:54 PM angel-roh wow your 12 years old...hehe nice for a 12 year ol... Jan 11 2005, 06:56 PM iiiiiiiYON GOOD POTENTiAL HAWMiE Jan 17 2005, 01:16 AM xquizit_femme nice :] Jan 17 2005, 03:40 AM xtransatlanticismx hey! i'm twelve years old too!
it... Jan 18 2005, 04:19 PM
sheepy wow you're 12? that's awesome girl. i love... Feb 4 2005, 08:00 PM |
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