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not completely satisfied.., i need a lil help
smilz2dasun
post Jan 12 2005, 01:03 AM
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hi, my name is hillary
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well.. this is my second layout i made for xanga. im really not happy with it.. but that's what came out. i know somethings there could be alot of changes but i dont really know what...so i was hoping u guys could help me out. the stuff written in the center part of the arrow is all inside jokes..


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post Jan 12 2005, 08:03 PM
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hm... it's pretty good. it seems that you took a bunch of ideas and merged them into one. it's just too scattered.

and also, you need a comma in "well see what happened was..." it's supposed to be "well see, what happened was..."
 

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