You, a sweet/sad little poem Options

[azn hunni xox]

You

When my world was charcoaled black,
You gave me inspiration to get on track,
The conforting words you talked me through,
I guess I believed that they were true,
The powers you have to make me smile,
But the happiness... it's been a while,
Looking at you, seeing your soft warm eyes,
How they've changed, now all I see are lies,
The ways you've hurt me, like you don't care,
The goodness I got out of you, the things I bear,
You don't know how much I've lost,
You said you'd do anything, no matter the cost,
But now I know, my life is so low,
I've tried to be strong, tried to free myself of woe,
But for some reason I can't,
I've forgotten your faithful chant,
It's so clear now, there's nothing I can do,
All I ever needed... was you.


Okay, so it's not great... but what do you expect from a 12 year old?

[angel-roh]

wow your 12 years old...hehe nice for a 12 year old hehe. This sounds like when I was trying to commit suicide and my best friend, Justin came along and give me these advices on not to do this. Like it's not my best choice. But yeah great job!