hurt me one last time |
 Jan 8 2005, 02:19 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
HURT ME ONE LAST TIME
I’ve lost count of the knives you left in my back Because my abacus only goes to one hundred But I think there’s room for one more So, please Hurt me one last time So I can die once and for all Just hurt me one last time So I can die once and for all I’ve lost track of how many hours you’ve left me here Hanging from this noose Because my calendar only measures one year So, please Hurt me one last time So I can die once and for all I’ll sleep sound in my gave I’d like to thank you for digging it for me I wouldn’t have loved you unless I wanted you to kill me I wouldn’t have opened up unless I wanted you to steal from me Love is a sward You live by it, you die by it Unfortunately It’s the sweetest blade to ever pierce my skin One more knife in my back One more day on the noose Promise you’ll let me die for once And for all Pretty please Hurt me one last time So I can die once and for all Hurt me one last time So I can die once and for all Hurt me one last time Hurt me one last time Hurt me, damn it For one last f**king time |
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Jan 11 2005, 06:52 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
When I read all of your lyrics.
It sounded like a hard rock metal type of song. I guess that's how you wanted it to be. But anyways it's okay. I'll say 8 out of 10. Because it's 8 out of 10 is because I didn't like when you mentioned the knife part, sounds too violence, eh? But the rest --- it was good. Some art and emotions you did hehe. |
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ryfitaDF hurt me one last time Jan 8 2005, 02:19 AM
MyVermilionPlague Nice.
I like this one a lot.
"One more knife... Jan 8 2005, 03:56 AM smthngcrprategrl34 you write a lot of really good poems. and this one... Jan 8 2005, 01:31 PM stephinika very nice. i quite like it. the feeling put into i... Jan 8 2005, 08:37 PM Kathleen Ahh. Is this about someone I know? It reminds me ... Jan 8 2005, 10:53 PM TreesTurnMeOn QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jan 8 2005, 2:19 AM)I’ve los... Jan 9 2005, 01:07 PM
ryfitaDF QUOTE(TreesTurnMeOn @ Jan 9 2005, 1:07 PM)Mar... Jan 9 2005, 01:37 PM TreesTurnMeOn QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jan 9 2005, 1:37 PM)hehe. ok... Jan 9 2005, 01:50 PM iiiiiiiYON WOW... =P Jan 17 2005, 01:13 AM sheepy wow i loveee your work. it sounds soo wow. lols Feb 4 2005, 08:04 PM sweetdreamsx3 It sounds like a song. Lol nice job! Feb 5 2005, 05:55 PM Spiritual Winged Aura LOL, i like the last sentence. Feb 5 2005, 07:30 PM ThinkJohn thats deep and u know what i like i like so keepin... Feb 6 2005, 12:41 AM megmanson Really great poem, John. I really like this one. *... Feb 6 2005, 11:49 PM nyctophiliac That's really good (as always) LunchboxXx but ... Feb 7 2005, 08:09 PM |
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