old men in the park, a depressing peom Options

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I wrote this for my English 2 class. Please tell me what you think of it . Thank you.


The Old Man in the Park

Walking through the park
The old man hears a bark
All of a sudden he thinks about his wife
When she got stabbed with a knife
He starts crying a great deal of pain
The sky turns dark and it starts to rain
He can never forget his wife
She will always be a part of his life
Never will the man find another lover truer than her...