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Losing Innocence
AeroWhistle
post Jan 7 2005, 09:16 PM
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"Hush my amour" you whispered,
the voice that enraptured my deepest desires,
and conceived by the same allure of the visage
that was blurred.

Eyes-- my own, unable to breathe, for they;
drowning in tears, spoke of the lust our love
had averted throughout all these years.

A gentle move, my heart doth incline,
passions explode, your lush lips come to mine.

Sensationally sweet, the rushing tastes flow,
we should turn back now, salacious tongues won't let go.

Trembling bodies touch, and later ignite,
how you ravished me so, on this, fateful night.

Hips, how they pressed, the moment abrupt,
Our lives forever changed, as we suddenly erupt.

Gazing at one another, we could say nothing more,
I took my last glance, hearing "au revoir mon amour".
 
 
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inthemudhole
post Jan 8 2005, 02:18 PM
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Wow, that's really good.

I really love this part..

" "Hush my amour" you whispered,
the voice that enraptured my deepest desires,
and conceived by the same allure of the visage
that was blurred. "

Nice job. [=
 

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AeroWhistle   Losing Innocence   Jan 7 2005, 09:16 PM
MyVermilionPlague   Wow, that's really good. I really love this p...   Jan 8 2005, 02:18 PM
stephinika   wow this is beautiful...i love the vocabulary you ...   Jan 8 2005, 08:16 PM


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