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 Apr 4 2004, 05:32 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch.  Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643  |
Yesterday my friend came over .. and we wrote a little love poem! lol we're amateurz, so it sounds sort of weird:
i didnt think i could love anyone as much as i love you for the sound of ur voice makes all my dreamz come true i need u to be there for me constantly waiting and listenin to my pleas i need u there to cheer me up i need u there to wish me good luck so ... waddaya think? lol |
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Apr 4 2004, 09:50 PM
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 advanced newbie... S2 Group: Member Posts: 3,504 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 752 |
NICE!
 kinda short tho.  maybe you should make it longer. DUDE i didnt get to see you at the concert!  hahaha 
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ichiban A poem Apr 4 2004, 05:32 PM
dani41790 nyce poem. its betta than the poems i've writt... Apr 4 2004, 07:35 PM krnxswat Wish you good luck for what? Apr 4 2004, 07:37 PM conster wow very nice Apr 4 2004, 11:27 PM LQ_Darksoul For future reference...Poems don't have to ryh... Apr 4 2004, 11:47 PM ichiban To xjjajeengx ... I THINK I saw you but i wasn... Apr 5 2004, 12:17 AM inn0centmarianne nice poem Apr 5 2004, 01:06 PM xtremeliquid Nice poem. Apr 8 2004, 06:24 PM LQ_Darksoul There should be more poem threads....I like poems.... Apr 9 2004, 12:33 AM LuShuZxLaNa QUOTE(LQ_Darksoul @ Apr 8 2004, 10:33 PM)Ther... Apr 9 2004, 01:12 AM LQ_Darksoul QUOTEshort poems. heh. why won't you read long... Apr 9 2004, 01:18 AM LuShuZxLaNa QUOTE(LQ_Darksoul @ Apr 8 2004, 11:18 PM)Well... Apr 9 2004, 02:17 PM LQ_Darksoul YEs...I like your elongated tongue... I enjoy lots... Apr 9 2004, 05:25 PM
Jordan Inc. haha nice poem Apr 10 2004, 12:03 AM |
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