A few Poems Options

[IamRad]

Here are just some poems i wrote a looong time ago.. tell me what you think..

See I really want to tell you everything
the thing is all my feelings cant get put onto paper
Something holds me back and im not sure what i feel anymore
One minute, you make me extremely happy
The next, im crying because of you..
I guess you could say i have the most mixed up feelings for you
they've been like this from day one..


--about my boyfriend...

he's something i had been thinking of
and something i cared for so much
and in the end it all worked out

ur the only one that could say such things
the only one who cares
i know i can always count on u
cuz ur the sweetest one out there

so many laughs and so many things said
i wouldnt trade it for a thing
everything is special, especially the things we share


Look at the stars and look at me, do u see a resemblence or is it just what i see? I lit you up and made you see, theres more to life especially with you and me. The shining star is something depicting us and the amazing memories ahead, your just to blind to see it cuz that star is too bright. the memories are too bright for u, u dont want so much out of me. A friend is all i can ever be. I hope you understand i can be the brightest star out there, you and i together would bring life to the night sky. you and i would make me the brightest girl out there..


You're the person i can always turn to,
you're the person ill always care for
you're the person who can say the sweetest thing at the right time
you're the person who i can always laugh with
you're the person i want to be with
you're the person that i'll always turn to, talk to, care for, and all the things u can think of..
you're the person who is just amazing<3

the hardest thing for me is to see...you
with.. her.. together
it breaks my heart each time..
i dont think it could be put back together
its been played around with for way too long..
i wish there was a cure for all of this..
Everytime i think about you
and all the stupid things you do
it makes me feel worse and makes my heart split in two...(again)
Did you ever thing that your decisions affect me so much?
No, i didnt think so, cause i never got asked.
you assumed i was over you, but my feeling will always last..


Which one do YOU like best?

[*Kathleen*]

Aww...I like how all of the poems are like a story. But the ending's...sad. I suppose this one's my favorite:

You're the person i can always turn to,
you're the person ill always care for
you're the person who can say the sweetest thing at the right time
you're the person who i can always laugh with
you're the person i want to be with
you're the person that i'll always turn to, talk to, care for, and all the things u can think of..
you're the person who is just amazing<3

[IamRad]

Aww...I like how all of the poems are like a story. But the ending's...sad. I suppose this one's my favorite:

thanks thats my favorite out of those too