Chilish Dreams |
 Dec 28 2004, 09:13 AM
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 You make me sad. =(  Group: Member Posts: 158 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 72,818  |
Okay okay... i made this a longggg time ago...
Childish Dreams I've always had this wish you see It's to someday fly over a tree Never once had it come true Making me feel oh so blue Maybe someday I'll be able To fly atleast above a table Face no longer with a frown Smiling brightly like a clown Grant my wish is what I plead Or my dream shall forever bleed yaa.. constructive critismns are wanted haha.. |
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Dec 29 2004, 11:41 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
It's cute. (:
I like it, nice job. [= |
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Wishful Thinking Chilish Dreams Dec 28 2004, 09:13 AM
Weird addiction omy that is so wonderful! Dec 28 2004, 10:03 AM sharerol Aww, that's a cute poem. Heh, it's nice. ... Dec 29 2004, 11:45 PM
xSWEETxCANDiix i love it! Dec 30 2004, 06:31 AM |
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