A newbie poem |
 Dec 23 2004, 08:44 PM
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Okies everyone my first poem in this place hope you like:
Sent from above I can still feel that warm embrace That warm kiss you left on my face All I did was give youallmy love All I knew was that you were sent from above You know I'll never let you down Because I'll always be around I can't belive that we are done I can't belive our love is gone My feeling still for you are here I always keep them near You will always be my first love Just because you were sent from above Well I hope you like it. Advice would help if you don't like it. i'll try and see if I can put up some more! Heh! Oh yeh that poem are for people that lost there first love! |
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Dec 24 2004, 12:07 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that is good
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tifa A newbie poem Dec 23 2004, 08:44 PM
sunissed14127 thats really good.....nice job Dec 23 2004, 09:03 PM
tifa thanks a bunch! here's another one! lo... Dec 24 2004, 05:59 PM |
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