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 Dec 16 2004, 07:17 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
In my life
Throughout all the strife You've been there for me whenever I was down You were always able to make me smile when I had a frown No matter what happens or what someone says You were always there to brighten up my days All I want from you is to stay by my side, showing me sunshine It's times like these that I'm glad that your smile is so benign It's times like these that I should tell you that you're forever in my heart I wish that we didn't have to be apart... I don't want to say good-bye whenever I'm with you This ain't a pick-up line; whatever you hear from me is true WHEEEEEEEE!! *sigh* I'm reinspired..just thought I'd say this. 
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Dec 16 2004, 08:44 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
Lolz this poem does sound like a pick-up line =P Just say it out loud
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Cloud_X another one Dec 16 2004, 07:17 PM
xbr0kensmil3 aww. it touched me Dec 16 2004, 07:21 PM angel-roh your poem is soo me!! heh i have the same ... Dec 18 2004, 12:22 PM smthngcrprategrl34 aw!!!it's sweet! Dec 18 2004, 06:31 PM Cloud_X QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Dec 16 2004, 8:44 PM)Lolz... Dec 19 2004, 01:36 PM xtremeliquid Heh...nice. Dec 19 2004, 03:20 PM xSWEETxCANDiix that's awesome! great job! Dec 20 2004, 06:39 AM Frankie it seems happy and sad at the same time. nice job. Dec 20 2004, 11:07 AM
sikdragon two syllables, rewrite. I hate to sound like simon... Dec 21 2004, 03:35 AM |
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