if i should die before i wake... |
if i should die before i wake... |
Dec 14 2004, 04:41 PM
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IF I SHOULD DIE BEFORE I WAKE
if i should die before i wake there is soemthing i'd like to know do you love me? or were those words you said just a lie? i feel your soft lips touch mine and i want to know this is real that everythings gonna be okay that you will never leave me cuz i don't wanna let you go i thought nobody would ever love me but you proved me wrong you said i was special, and that i'd always be somebody to you so please tell me that everything we have is real that is the only think i'd like to know if i should die before i wake |
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Dec 16 2004, 03:57 PM
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![]() my <3 is in Ohio ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
you have the first part right the "if i die before i wake" thing that's like i want to know how you really feel and like you don't know really if your gonna live or not cuz anything can happen to you so the person's saying tell me now cuz i might not live long enough for you to tell me later. make sence?
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smthngcrprategrl34 if i should die before i wake... Dec 14 2004, 04:41 PM
angel-roh so this poem is actually saying that you want to k... Dec 15 2004, 01:49 PM
swtxcatastrophe I like your screename and sig! Dec 16 2004, 05:05 PM
Sa-Chan I really like the "If I should die before I w... Dec 16 2004, 06:08 PM
smthngcrprategrl34 thank you swtxcatastrophe i like your screen name ... Dec 17 2004, 04:08 PM
Flip-o-Matic nice poemmm reminds me of my old days... Dec 17 2004, 04:30 PM
smthngcrprategrl34 i see...well thank you for the comment! Dec 18 2004, 07:49 PM
sikdragon one word, cliche. It intrigued me at first but it ... Dec 21 2004, 03:57 AM
smthngcrprategrl34 i see....thank you very much for your input Dec 21 2004, 11:29 AM![]() ![]() |