another confused love poem, please comment!!! |
 Dec 8 2004, 04:40 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio  Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599  |
a weekago i was your life and you were mine
i was the happiest i can ever remember being but that was a week ago and this is a week later and you are my life but i don't know if i'm still yours i am more scared then i can ever remember being there are so many things that i haven't told you how much i care about you how i think i'm falling in love with you... but that was a week later and this is the week after that and you have reassured me that everything's fine that i'm still your life and i assure you that you are still mine i am more confused then i can ever remember being all my friends say that you aren't right for me that i can do so much better but they don't know you like i do people are spreading rumors trying to break us apart but this is the week after that and i don't know what's going to happen the week after this but i hope i find out with you yeah i know it's kinda badish but leave comments and tell me what you thinK! |
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Dec 16 2004, 03:54 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
yea i know i couldn't really think of anything to replace "week" with...
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