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 Dec 9 2004, 11:14 PM
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 sweet/not/sour  Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,748  |
blech, poetry class at school. gave it my best shot, yet it's still odd. well here it is:
Differences and similarities but really we're all the same deep down in our hearts is the part we have to blame Feelings getting all messed up under control, all thought out wish i knew what was going on or what this really was about we regret it, i know but what can we do this world is tumbled and scattered there's no peace between me and you our differences and similarities are really all the same because deep down in our hearts is the part we have to blame  ech, short i know
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Dec 15 2004, 02:23 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
sounds like a movie saying that you cant turn back from all those scattered memories. heh good try for a first try ;)
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mizzlem0nade first try Dec 9 2004, 11:14 PM
Cloud_X It's not short. There's a certain somethin... Dec 10 2004, 12:24 AM so0o_contagious this ones good. i like. lol. Dec 10 2004, 01:48 PM
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