strands of existance, poems.... |
 Oct 16 2004, 05:27 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
Josh
Why can't I look you in the eye? What do I try to hide? Is there something no one knows about me? What is it I don't want you to see? Too many questions for my mind to comprehend never sleeping wanting questioning to end, I stare in my mirror rimmed with gold, searching for an answer on a face that looks so cold. These feelings won't leave me be. The lies keeping stirring leading back to me. I'm trying but I still feel incomplete Feel like I'm dieing and you refuse to hold me. I'll tell you everything I'll show you what I know But it won't be enough. Til it's over the answer is lost to you. Til I find it there can be nothing left to prove I won't hide, but it's what I want to do I'll stick it out because I know I love you.. |
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Dec 15 2004, 02:15 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
umm... how about making another topic and not making so much poems in one topic? >.<;;;;;;;;
anyways i like the first one. i had to read all of the first part because it was so me lol. i wont read the 3rd and the rest poems if only you make another topic about it >.<;;;; |
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RiddleMeWonders strands of existance Oct 16 2004, 05:27 PM
RiddleMeWonders Getting There
Since the moment I ran away
I... Oct 17 2004, 02:20 PM MasteRxKiD First poem is pretty good...simple as well.
Second... Oct 17 2004, 03:09 PM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Oct 17 2004, 2:20 PM)... Oct 20 2004, 04:18 PM MasteRxKiD Waaaay better than the first.
Bravo. Glad I was of... Oct 20 2004, 04:27 PM RiddleMeWonders Get a Memory
It's the things you never say
An... Nov 7 2004, 01:56 AM RiddleMeWonders You can't just wipe it away, and say it's ... Nov 15 2004, 06:10 PM RiddleMeWonders Free writing... HAHA! I haven't done this ... Nov 26 2004, 12:50 PM RiddleMeWonders This is all I have so far. It doesn't mean any... Dec 6 2004, 03:42 PM RiddleMeWonders What is alone?
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