if i should die before i wake... |
 Dec 14 2004, 04:41 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio  Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599  |
IF I SHOULD DIE BEFORE I WAKE
if i should die before i wake there is soemthing i'd like to know do you love me? or were those words you said just a lie? i feel your soft lips touch mine and i want to know this is real that everythings gonna be okay that you will never leave me cuz i don't wanna let you go i thought nobody would ever love me but you proved me wrong you said i was special, and that i'd always be somebody to you so please tell me that everything we have is real that is the only think i'd like to know if i should die before i wake |
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Dec 15 2004, 01:49 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
so this poem is actually saying that you want to know if that person really loved you or was he just playing around with your love life...but the only thing i don't really get is the part when you said "if i should die before i wake" so do you basically meant by not hearing what your lover says because you know he really faked out your love with him? if im wrong, eck help me out then?
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smthngcrprategrl34 if i should die before i wake... Dec 14 2004, 04:41 PM
smthngcrprategrl34 you have the first part right the "if i die b... Dec 16 2004, 03:57 PM swtxcatastrophe I like your screename and sig! Dec 16 2004, 05:05 PM Sa-Chan I really like the "If I should die before I w... Dec 16 2004, 06:08 PM smthngcrprategrl34 thank you swtxcatastrophe i like your screen name ... Dec 17 2004, 04:08 PM Flip-o-Matic nice poemmm reminds me of my old days... Dec 17 2004, 04:30 PM smthngcrprategrl34 i see...well thank you for the comment! Dec 18 2004, 07:49 PM sikdragon one word, cliche. It intrigued me at first but it ... Dec 21 2004, 03:57 AM
smthngcrprategrl34 i see....thank you very much for your input Dec 21 2004, 11:29 AM |
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