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 Dec 7 2004, 07:30 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
the world really needs to end soon. humanity has been EFFing things up for far too long now. i wrote a thrash metal song about it. enjoy.
GENOCIDE I give up on human kind They’re all a f**king waste of time The only thing they do is waste Blades will trace a bleeding line No heaven, hell, or god divine Just genocide with brutal haste Global warming would be nice The four horsemen would suffice Media sell suicide Hope no one will intervene All and all, by any means I just what this world to f**king die Extinction of the hairless ape Reprisal for the earth it rapes With ignorance and hypocrisy Their judgment on the gays and jews Exploit the things we keep taboo Inspire my misanthropy A real independence day Or deep impact with tidal waves Or the Myans in two-thousand twelve The return of Jesus Christ Is a worthy sacrifice To see it die I'll gladly burn in hell! |
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Dec 8 2004, 12:02 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
Wow no offense to the females but that sounds so weak. I mean if you meant that you must be a P**sy*no offense to the women*. I mean wow, you make little girls seem masculine. Not to mention your gross interpretation on worldly events and the world's peoples. Induced state of thinking certainly isn't your strong point.
But, yeah that sounds like thrash. Make it longer because if you want a decent pace you gotta have somewhere to go. Those stanzas just wouldn't sound good repeated as they are now. Maybe if you broke them up and expanded and made it more graphic. F*ck*n-A tho right? |
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ryfitaDF genocide Dec 7 2004, 07:30 PM
Kathleen That's the way to think, Lunchbox. Dec 7 2004, 07:43 PM ComradeRed How...angsty. I should write a happy poem later. ^... Dec 7 2004, 08:58 PM
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