a few poems i wrote off the top of, my head when i was sad/depressed/mad |
 Nov 26 2004, 06:48 PM
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Dec 2 2004, 12:32 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
uhmm..Interesting...In your first poem either you should keep the entire thing rhyming. As for the other 2. They're okay but keep writing. You'll get better over time.
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sunissed14127 a few poems i wrote off the top of Nov 26 2004, 06:48 PM
sunissed14127 i guess no one has anything to say..... lol Dec 1 2004, 04:18 PM electric shock i like it.
it seems like you were in the "moo... Dec 2 2004, 11:03 PM Spirited Away QUOTE(sunissed14127 @ Nov 26 2004, 6:48 PM)Yo... Dec 2 2004, 11:42 PM Frankie oh, i like how they rhyme. they are really emotion... Dec 4 2004, 06:54 PM
sunissed14127 thank you so much everyone! =) Dec 7 2004, 06:52 PM |
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