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![]() :: Le Mono :: ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 52,334 ![]() |
![]() my.xanga i encourage strong critique but tell me ways that i can improve it. please do not bash my feelings... ![]() just remember i am an artist and i'm sensitive about my isssh mannnn! |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 507 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 832 ![]() |
-I dont think you need the red element, the greenish/yellow color is enough of a contrast in the color pallete
-The text looks odd aligned right -The body should be wider, closer to the face -It would be cool if you could figure out a way to integrate the picture background with the green background. The ending is kind of abrupt. Maybe just center the whole thing into the middle of the screen. |
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