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A Drug's Rapacity
*Kathleen*
post Nov 21 2004, 12:35 AM
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"A Drug's Rapacity"
I dream of concocting a subterfuge to move on
Yet, his inscrutable behavior attracts me
Regardless of his nonchalant actions, he's gone

The infamous (yet equally nefarious) friend is to blame
It's love...despite his incorrigible behavior
Granted, deep down, all men are all but one in the same

My body collapses as I take the plunge below
Deeper I sink as the ubiquitousness of water surrounds
I made sure to leave the letter - a guarantee for him to know

No more sanguine-natured friends to speak
No more paranoid nights spent battling tears
No more contemplating the future as being so bleak

My chagrin brought upon his temerity
My volatility annihilated by his melancholy
This lugubrious immolation defies my tenacity

If only this were not so useless
If only his eyes were not sewn shut
He might have seen how they are utterly deleterious
 
 
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post Nov 29 2004, 08:20 PM
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'Twas a cold night in the darkest of lands,
When a tall strange man drove up to some bands,
"Surrender," said he, "those foul drugs are mine,"
"Nay," said a bandit, "while we're stuck in rhyme."

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.

"Those substances do no good," said the man,
"But alas, we love them," the bandits ran!
"Hold," said he, "my name is Barry the King."
His name ran out with a resounding ring.

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.

His long, dark suit, and tinted sunglasses,
Flew in the wind faster than molasses,
His subjects lined up, 'twas the bandits they faced,
Though surrounded, they continued to race.

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.

But by now, the bandits were kept at bay,
The King said, "I'll make your families eat hay!"
"No longer will you have these drugs to use,"
"No longer will you have this choice to choose."

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.

"Please," said the humblest bandit leader,
"Leave us in peace and we'll follow meter,"
"Not so," the King said and his subjects came,
Letting from their rifles a lethal rain.

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.

Through the pass of years and the ruin of lives,
What could be more harmful than plants like chives?
Such rule by the King, great leader of all,
'Twas he ultimately that caused the fall.

In all my journeys, encounters I've had,
Things have rarely, rarely been near this bad.
 

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Kathleen   A Drug's Rapacity   Nov 21 2004, 12:35 AM
NatiMarie   Excellent use of words Kathleen. I like the flow ...   Nov 21 2004, 01:14 AM
ryfitaDF   i know how you feel. EFF people who want to bring ...   Nov 21 2004, 04:33 PM
Kathleen   Thanks you, too. Ack. This forum really is dead, ...   Nov 29 2004, 02:12 AM
ComradeRed   I dunno   Nov 29 2004, 12:30 PM
Kathleen   Of course you know - you're the almighty Minda...   Nov 29 2004, 01:00 PM
ComradeRed   Perhaps I do   Nov 29 2004, 01:24 PM
Cloud_X   QUOTE(Mrs. Johnny Depp @ Nov 29 2004, 2:12 AM...   Nov 29 2004, 07:57 PM
ComradeRed   Hmm I'm a poet myself, but more of the old str...   Nov 29 2004, 08:01 PM
ComradeRed   'Twas a cold night in the darkest of lands, Wh...   Nov 29 2004, 08:20 PM
Kathleen   Niiice, Minda. And thank you, Cloud.   Nov 29 2004, 08:28 PM
Cloud_X   No problem. Oh by the way, name's Nguyen =]   Nov 29 2004, 09:38 PM
Gypsy Eyes   nice, i really like it! and a great use of wor...   Nov 29 2004, 10:10 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Nov 29 2004, 9:38 PM)No probl...   Nov 30 2004, 06:50 AM
sikdragon   In Amsterdam Hash, weed, and shrooms are all legal...   Nov 30 2004, 08:26 AM
Cloud_X   QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Nov 30 2004, 6:50 AM), Jam...   Nov 30 2004, 08:48 PM
ComradeRed   Hehe, be that as it may, just the way you said it ...   Nov 30 2004, 09:25 PM
Cloud_X   Oh I see. hahahah It does doesn't it? Well how...   Dec 2 2004, 12:42 AM
Kathleen   That's because he's too lazy to. He prefe...   Dec 2 2004, 06:17 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Cloud_X @ Dec 2 2004, 12:42 AM)Oh I see...   Dec 2 2004, 06:49 PM
Spirited Away   QUOTE(ComradeRed @ Dec 2 2004, 6:49 PM)I have...   Dec 2 2004, 07:04 PM
ComradeRed   Haha it's okay.   Dec 2 2004, 07:30 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(Mrs. Jose Olegario @ Dec 2 2004, 6:17 P...   Dec 2 2004, 09:50 PM
Kathleen   No, that's correct. I was referring to how you...   Dec 4 2004, 06:40 PM
Frankie   that was so good. i love the rhymes. i didn't...   Dec 4 2004, 07:00 PM
ComradeRed   QUOTE(<3 cep @ Dec 4 2004, 6:40 PM)No, tha...   Dec 4 2004, 08:17 PM


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