My Grandma, a poem Options

[LostInMyKryptoni...]

i wrote this poem today, for my grandma, who does everything to help others before she helps herself, she drives from panama city FLA to Warner robins GA just to visit my aunt and uncle and to help others. she drives people to the bank when she goes to georgia once a month, she runs to the store for people who need food, or does arronds for people, she takes care of anyone who may need it, and she doens't expect anything in return. the thing i love most about my grandma is that she is kind to all and always manages to help those who need it, i truly belive she was an angel sent to heaven to help others. she's the best person in my life.i would like some feedback on the poem if that will be possible....here's the poem titled.....

"my grandma"

A beautiful angel
With a heart so warm
Sent from heaven
In a woman’s form
She helps others
In their time of need
She does so much
And has no greed
Always on her feet
Going here or there
Not wasting any time
And always being fair
It’s amazing how
She can do so much
She must be an angel
With heaven’s touch
How else can you explain
The goodness of her ways
This woman’s my grandma
She never seizes to amaze

LeKeyshia Marie Richardson
Copyright ©2004 LeKeyshia Marie Richardson

[sunissed14127]

thats a great poem.....my grandma is like that too....she's always trying to do things for others