strands of existance, poems.... |
 Oct 16 2004, 05:27 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
Josh
Why can't I look you in the eye? What do I try to hide? Is there something no one knows about me? What is it I don't want you to see? Too many questions for my mind to comprehend never sleeping wanting questioning to end, I stare in my mirror rimmed with gold, searching for an answer on a face that looks so cold. These feelings won't leave me be. The lies keeping stirring leading back to me. I'm trying but I still feel incomplete Feel like I'm dieing and you refuse to hold me. I'll tell you everything I'll show you what I know But it won't be enough. Til it's over the answer is lost to you. Til I find it there can be nothing left to prove I won't hide, but it's what I want to do I'll stick it out because I know I love you.. |
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Nov 26 2004, 12:50 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Free writing... HAHA! I haven't done this in a while.
Hot and sweating... Heavy breathing... Trying to get through the gates. Only concerned for ourselves. God damn the bleeding to burn in hell. No room for suffering innocents in this place where no one has a face. Indecision on what to say to the people infront and on the way. Tide cast me out to sea with all the rest. We did our best. Time to go home. It's not over till the fat lady sings. Oh wait that's me? So I guess it's over you see. Pick up the baggage that has washed ashore. Put together the pieces of the puzzle you've been waiting for, to solve. Last call for all the ones who want to stay. Give you're name and number it's not too late. After sun lets down we'll be on our way. Wet and Living masses with one thing to say.... "Keep moving. don't stop. If you fall... you'll stay down.. We'll walk on you... You'll have to crawl.... Pick your feet up. Don't drop the pace. We'll leave you behind." __________________ PLEASE Give Comments |
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RiddleMeWonders strands of existance Oct 16 2004, 05:27 PM
RiddleMeWonders Getting There
Since the moment I ran away
I... Oct 17 2004, 02:20 PM MasteRxKiD First poem is pretty good...simple as well.
Second... Oct 17 2004, 03:09 PM RiddleMeWonders QUOTE(RiddleMeWonders @ Oct 17 2004, 2:20 PM)... Oct 20 2004, 04:18 PM MasteRxKiD Waaaay better than the first.
Bravo. Glad I was of... Oct 20 2004, 04:27 PM RiddleMeWonders Get a Memory
It's the things you never say
An... Nov 7 2004, 01:56 AM RiddleMeWonders You can't just wipe it away, and say it's ... Nov 15 2004, 06:10 PM RiddleMeWonders This is all I have so far. It doesn't mean any... Dec 6 2004, 03:42 PM RiddleMeWonders What is alone?
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angel-roh umm... how about making another topic and not maki... Dec 15 2004, 02:15 PM |
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