Little Girl, PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS |
 Nov 16 2004, 09:22 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
The world is moving faster now,
I'm on a changing course, But you have helped me deal with life, You have been a stable force. When nothing else held together, Or made the slightest bit of sense, You helped me restore, My inner confidence. Although you are in my mind, Only and image of who I once was, You still give me the advice, That I would have given myself when I was still an innocent sensible little girl. Things in my life are a constant reminder, Of who I once was, And although I seem different than I was before, I am still, deep down, the little girl everyone seemed to love. |
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Nov 20 2004, 10:51 AM
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 Stay Cheezin Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,829 |
wow ur really talented with poetry and i see right through you as i read ur poems they really make me feel as if i know you because i feel the same exact emotions through your poetry..good job =)
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babygrl23 Little Girl Nov 16 2004, 09:22 PM
Br0kenxImag3 Heh, It was good. I like it a lot =)
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I lo... Nov 16 2004, 10:57 PM babygrl23 QUOTE(Br0kenxImag3 @ Nov 16 2004, 10:57 PM)--... Nov 17 2004, 09:48 PM azn_r4pf4n whoah, that poem is one of the most touchin poems ... Nov 20 2004, 10:56 AM
babygrl23 thanks Nov 20 2004, 11:10 AM |
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