...This little girl... |
 Nov 19 2004, 09:31 PM
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 --*WoAh  Group: Member Posts: 67 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,517  |
Err, It's not that good for I havent written in such a long time. I don't know what drove me to...But I felt an urge to write. So, I know it's not that good, But here it is.
{{-Untitled with Pain-}} Pain, Fear, Screaming pain... I feel like I'm living in vain The screams, They fill the room... My eyes, Full of gloom. Sorrow sweeps around the corner. Every eye that sees becomes a morner... He raises his hand and comes down hard. The pain is an echo... An echo of inside. This little girl, Just has to hide.... Please excuse my horrible grammer. Thanks. Hope you liked. 
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Nov 20 2004, 10:13 AM
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Hey thats a pretty kool short poem, not sure about the line-Every eye that sees becomes a morner... but apart from that-nice job!
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Br0kenxImag3 ...This little girl... Nov 19 2004, 09:31 PM
fairy_princess Hey thats a pretty kool short poem, not sure about... Nov 20 2004, 10:12 AM
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