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a poem i wrote like a month ago, it's not that good...
lonelydevil426
post Nov 19 2004, 07:44 AM
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Alone

Beautiful flowers bloom in spring.
The air is cleansed by an April rain.
Lovely nature surrounds the earth.
While a lonely weed just had its birth.

Flowers turn away with great disgust.
The vegetables gave it zero trust.
But a weed is just a weed.
They can’t control their awful deed.

If everyone could choose what to be,
No one would want to be lonely like me.
I am that weed and no one cares.
Around me I sense all their glares.

For once, why can’t someone understand?
I don’t wanna be destroyed by human hands.
Why can’t I just be admired?
Why must I die alone in fire?

Why do you all hate me so?
You’re not even sad to see me go.
But what have I ever done to you?
I understand I’m only a weed, I really do.
 
 
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sikdragon
post Nov 19 2004, 12:32 PM
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Because you take all the water from the other plants.

I don't think you're a weed. Just a swan among ducks.
 

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