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Promise Me You'll Never Let Go...I Promise, Kate Winslet and Leonardo DiCaprio
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post Nov 15 2004, 11:54 PM
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I just watched Titanic.....tear. I love that movie....I know this one is real simple, but i wanted it to be that way. I wanted it to be more emotional than flashy u know? so lemme know what u think.
 
 
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post Nov 16 2004, 01:35 PM
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The text on the right isn't a title; you're not supposed to capitalize all the letters. You put "Promise Me You'll Never Let go, no matter how hopeless" but it should be "Promise me you'll never let go, no matter how hopeless." I know that's really picky of me, but it was hammered into my mind in AP English last year.

And I don't really think the techish text on "Content" and "Hopeless Thoughts" matches.

Other than that, I really like it. Simplicity is nice.
 

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