whispers in a subway |
whispers in a subway |
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![]() aiko Nakamura at your service ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 ![]() |
Didn't post in a long time so i decided to post. hahaa i finally had something to write about
I promise, these legs are broken, i won't walk away. Yours words are fake, so seal the lips tightly closed. now i close my eyes, hoping you won't see my lament tightly hold the bloody heart, minimizing the increasing beat &slowly lay on the stone cold floor, bringing my legs near. You learned so much, from that peek i let out. Now i see your eyes weeped, that day ago. feeling sorry i look into you, only to see the mockery. &now the voices we heard become whispers in a subway. |
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![]() hello : ) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 ![]() |
QUOTE(dreamerOi @ Nov 7 2004, 10:15 PM) haa. well at first im quoting what this guy said. he'll never leave &wont be like all the other people in my life and just walk away. so then im all. everything he says is a lie &that i close my eyes so he wont see that truly im actually sad and crying. then my heart begins to ache so i start to clench on it and lay down. &then i let out a blink that shows all my emotions so its saying that he saw my pain. then he faked these tears he let out to mock me &then we both slowly fade from each others memories. after reading the meaning, it makes much more sense and it is really good. i had to reread it like 5 times lol because i was trying to find a meaning by myself. but yeah, good job! |
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