eating an egg is like drinking coffee with sugar |
 Nov 9 2004, 03:14 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
Resting on the hinges
Lie dreams that will not be The egg All I knew All I hoped to know Able to be THE PUNISHMENT FOR THESE DREAMS: 30 minutes torture- An hour in the hole-- A life-time of What is left now ? |
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Nov 10 2004, 07:40 AM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
sorry
 i was rushy when i posted this the title isnt right... coffee may taste sweet with sugar, but the bitterness is still there *shrugs* this poem is about sheltered lives believe it or not we all start out in the egg, our home, our habitat and that is all we know we grow up in this habitat...form dreams and we try to fullfill those dreams, but they involve access to a completely different world that we know....which could make the simplest thing for one person torture to another my own dreams were on my mind when i wrote it x.x its very random kinda sucky....but i like it a little, lol |
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Heathasm eating an egg is like drinking coffee with sugar Nov 9 2004, 03:14 PM
MasteRxKiD Eh?
Okay, okay. dees hoit mah hed, chu know?
Time ... Nov 10 2004, 04:36 AM MasteRxKiD QUOTE(Heathasm @ Nov 10 2004, 4:40 AM)my own ... Nov 10 2004, 12:30 PM omg_melface okay! Nov 10 2004, 03:15 PM faithin_felix i didn't get it.. Nov 11 2004, 08:40 PM Heathasm ^^^^
with my poetry i dont usually explain it beca... Nov 11 2004, 09:22 PM PinkTrash yea, dont have to make sense. =] Nov 11 2004, 10:01 PM Chaos13 um nice poem!
what about eggs? Nov 11 2004, 10:03 PM
Heathasm wtf?
dont mock me...i already explained ass Nov 11 2004, 10:09 PM |
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