i shouldn't of let you go |
 Nov 7 2004, 09:37 PM
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 hi, my name is brianna! =]  Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114  |
I think of you each morning,
And dream of you every night, I wish that you were here, Holding me closely tight, But all my dreams are shattered, I knew that you were right, I shouldn't of let you go, 'Cuz you were all my life. Okay..not the best poem, but I tried. x] |
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Nov 8 2004, 01:37 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
The puppy avatar goes GREAT with the poem.
 Cute. Yeah, either drop the 'all' or change it to 'my entire life' |
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sweetxsimplicity i shouldn't of let you go Nov 7 2004, 09:37 PM
pAtRiCk_sTar nice poem!! great choice of words n nice r... Nov 7 2004, 09:50 PM Cloud_X Very good. Maybe you should take out "all... Nov 7 2004, 11:47 PM jambaJUICE Aww.. You let go of Mr. Right. Nov 8 2004, 12:56 AM xcesx ur poem was very touching and i felt your feelings... Nov 20 2004, 10:32 AM
sweetxsimplicity Thanks for all the feedback. Nov 20 2004, 01:42 PM |
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