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 Nov 5 2004, 12:08 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i just saw "saw" tonight and it blew my f*cking mind. i have to write atleast 8 lines about it. call this a work in progress. it sounds canibal corpse meets shadow's fall, with vortex from dimmu borgir singing the chorus (lines 9-12)
JIGSAW A mastermind at a game of his own A savior and a caster of stones A marionette with black pearl eyes Giving meaning to life through possible demise Plotting schemes to save or kill sinners Sadistic games that seldom have winners He’ll make you kill someone or cut off your hand Because people don’t want what he can’t have He is the jigsaw murderer The king of kill yourself He is sick. He’s sick of it all And this is your wake-up call i'm going to bed. night night. |
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Nov 5 2004, 01:43 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Seeing the title reminded me of the movie, and it looks like I hit the nail right on the head.
Not bad...Hope to see it as a finished product. |
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ryfitaDF jigsaw Nov 5 2004, 12:08 AM
jambaJUICE Haha that made me laugh.
Sounds sick and twisted.
... Nov 5 2004, 12:34 AM Cloud_X Interesting. Now it makes me wanna go watch ... Nov 5 2004, 07:43 PM
MyVermilionPlague :O
That's awesome.
I love your work! Nov 5 2004, 11:28 PM |
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