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sporadic
post Oct 30 2004, 02:21 PM
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and they say imitation is flattering
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Never Let Them See You Cry
Vision blurred, water streaming
out from my eyes
onto the cold, still surface
Why do I cry?
Complications, complications
Never let them see my tears
Run to my haven,
Its soft embrace,
Let my rage and sadness
Flow into the pillowcase,
Inhale, exhale,
shaky breathing,
But please don't let them
see me cry
 
 
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sheepy
post Nov 1 2004, 09:32 PM
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dizzy me up.
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love it. very deep :]
 

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sporadic   Don't Look   Oct 30 2004, 02:21 PM
MasteRxKiD   It's something different from your usual work....   Oct 31 2004, 10:34 PM
Heathasm   whoa for some reason i like this alot the style th...   Nov 1 2004, 03:59 AM
sheepy   love it. very deep :]   Nov 1 2004, 09:32 PM


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