Don't Look |
 Oct 30 2004, 02:21 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 and they say imitation is flattering  Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269  |
Never Let Them See You Cry
Vision blurred, water streaming out from my eyes onto the cold, still surface Why do I cry? Complications, complications Never let them see my tears Run to my haven, Its soft embrace, Let my rage and sadness Flow into the pillowcase, Inhale, exhale, shaky breathing, But please don't let them see me cry |
|
|
|
 |
Replies
|
Nov 1 2004, 03:59 AM
Post
#2
|
|
 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
whoa
for some reason i like this alot the style the vocabulary...i love it...it seems different from every other poem too |
|
|
|
Posts in this topic
sporadic Don't Look Oct 30 2004, 02:21 PM
MasteRxKiD It's something different from your usual work.... Oct 31 2004, 10:34 PM
sheepy love it. very deep :] Nov 1 2004, 09:32 PM |
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: