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 Oct 28 2004, 08:58 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
the stars so high, the stars so bright
you're the only one in my life that makes things right if id ever lose you, my whole world would end it'll be nothing anymore but just friends i would miss those times when we were together how we were close just as sister and brother id remember the smiles you'd have on your face memories torn inside me, your love cant be replaced ill always be there for you like i was from the start even if you gave your love to another mans heart seeing you smile again puts the warmness on my soul but these feelings i have for you, i cant control whenever i see the both of you together holding hands i picture me and you, but i have to be a man and understand i have to let you go and all these feelings for you no matter how much it'll hurt me this is the last thing to do i still dream of you everyday but now its over, i slowly drift away |
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Oct 29 2004, 08:47 PM
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catastrophic sweetness Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 |
PS--is it okay and put some of it on my AIM profile? It's a really good poem for this point in my life. Just wanna get the okay from you first.
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dispn0ygonekrazy memories Oct 28 2004, 08:58 AM
MasteRxKiD Odd transition with the past tense, 'what-if... Oct 28 2004, 03:13 PM dispn0ygonekrazy hmm ic what you mean man thnx uhh lets see proof r... Oct 28 2004, 05:49 PM swtxcatastrophe x33333 Oct 29 2004, 08:46 PM sweetxsimplicity Cute poem, I love it! xD Oct 29 2004, 10:13 PM dispn0ygonekrazy QUOTE(swtxcatastrophe @ Oct 29 2004, 5:47 PM)... Nov 1 2004, 01:12 AM Heathasm ooo i like very much...i didnt like the rhyming at... Nov 1 2004, 03:57 AM
T0rmented_Soul Old school stuff here. I use to be a good writer l... Sep 5 2006, 12:43 PM |
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