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The Train Wreck, sorta angsty
swtxcatastrophe
post Oct 26 2004, 07:38 PM
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My poetry is never much, just something for me to get my feeling out, but I still like to see what people say. I don't want to explain the subject publicaly, but if you IM me I can give you the 'inspriation' [if that's what you call it] for this piece.


-the train wreck-
It's weird how I can relate
to how you felt those last hours,
constantly.
It was also weird how I've felt
ever since you left me here,
that feeling really hasn't left,
nor do I think it ever will.
I've only got questions,
question that will never have anwsers.
Why didn't you get help?
I know it's hard, for someone so strong like you to let others in, but it helps, see, I would know it.
Why did you feel the way you did?
All that surronded you was love.
Were you out to hurt all of us?
Your mission was accomplished if that's it.
You were just gone, all in a matter of seconds,
And I'll always remember the seconds,
forever.
 
 
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swtxcatastrophe
post Oct 28 2004, 04:15 PM
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Thanks for the reply. I love feedback. Yeah, I wrote it like years after it happened, but the person just left me so confused, that I've still never figured it out, even though I'm going through the same stuff now.
 

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