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 Oct 26 2004, 10:00 PM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
women are evil, sensitive, hypocritcal cute little bastards
thats all i have to say to introduce this poem  The scar on my waist leads you around In existential maneuvers I say I’m not afraid To bleed all over you I tell you, now with my hand clasped over your mouth, How I gave up half my life for us And now I bleed from being torn So, taste my tear-stained lips As I hum, Giving you a pleasant tingle But maybe those are moans of agony Whatever, you have to deal now |
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Oct 28 2004, 03:29 PM
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 aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
yes we are evil. anyways your poems always engrosses me. i like it.
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Heathasm overdramatic Oct 26 2004, 10:00 PM
someflipguy I agree! Oct 27 2004, 08:34 AM MasteRxKiD I'm getting the hint of betrayal from this poe... Oct 28 2004, 03:25 PM tooeffingcrazy your poems suck. i hate it.
just kidding so blo... Oct 28 2004, 09:41 PM LadyXTor Wow, I like it! Very detailed and creative, i... Oct 28 2004, 11:16 PM
Heathasm wow thanks alot guys ^-^ your comments mean alot
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