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 Oct 22 2004, 11:27 AM
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 creepy heather  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580  |
eee, this was a quick write i did on word after reading some walt whitman...
Apostrophe He teemed the soul from my breast Through a perfect hole Penetrated with his boughs Of robust (yet hollow) steal To the upper left muscle Buried beneath my bone, And I keep choking, Now, on the remnants of My soul’s hot liquid, At once spilling Between his lips And coveting the apple In caramel delight He is the apostrophe, Before my name, Of security, promised, By the “apostrophe ‘s’” |
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Oct 25 2004, 12:21 PM
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creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
QUOTE(jambaJUICE @ Oct 24 2004, 2:05 PM)  seems romantic ? (i cant think of the word) But yeah its good. and i love those lines  yes i tend to get romantic in my poetry without inteding too...it bothers me some times lol  but thanks
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Heathasm apostrophe Oct 22 2004, 11:27 AM
jambaJUICE QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 22 2004, 11:27 AM)Betwee... Oct 24 2004, 02:05 PM sweetxsimplicity Wow, sounds really creative and mysterious. I love... Oct 24 2004, 09:23 PM MasteRxKiD Whitman rocks...
Yet another good submission from ... Oct 24 2004, 10:49 PM imadorkabledxd OOOOOH
He is the apostrophe,
Before my name,
i l... Mar 18 2005, 12:21 PM
Teesa wow, I love the "caramel" line a lot. Mar 18 2005, 07:11 PM |
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