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 Oct 22 2004, 10:50 PM
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 Kids.Have.All.The.Fun  Group: Member Posts: 228 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 33,943  |
this just randomely came out of my head [lol] obviously i dont usually write poems, or much of anything.. hince it not being very good. dont say anything mean, that'd be much appreciated.
-Live To Bleed- she shot her hands into the sky begged aloud 'lord let me die' dripping blood off her wrists landed lightly on her lips tears ran fast down her cheek she felt so cold, utterly weak looked to the left then to the ground grabbed the knife without a sound she cried once more, a final pleed 'God help me please, i live to bleed' ©-Me |
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Oct 24 2004, 10:41 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Short and drives the point straight on through...well done.
I think this is one of the first poems here that has ever mentioned the Lord/God. |
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mony0407 something.. Oct 22 2004, 10:50 PM
Heathasm whoa...that was very powerful..i had the whole ima... Oct 24 2004, 01:19 PM sweetxsimplicity Yeah, it was very powerful. You could imagine ever... Oct 24 2004, 09:28 PM dispn0ygonekrazy powerful stuff i agree Oct 24 2004, 10:12 PM
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