Love., [poem] |
 Oct 24 2004, 08:47 PM
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Why did our love have to be broken up?
You had given me your heart, As a token of our love But one day, You took it back, And broke it apart I treated you like a sack of gold, I treasured you with all that my heart could hold But all you returned to me with was pain, Nothing but pure pain to make me cry in vain When I stared into your baby blue eyes, I wanted to fly away from you, Get as far away as I possibly could, You were that person who hurt me, So deeply that the cut could never be healed You can never understand my love for you, You put that dirty sensation in my heart 'Cuz all you wanted was to tear us apart. Positive and negative feedback is greatly appreciated. 
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Oct 24 2004, 09:14 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
OMG !! i like this poem reminds me of my old love poems i use tooo write!! omg good job love it
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sweetxsimplicity Love. Oct 24 2004, 08:47 PM
sweetxsimplicity QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Oct 24 2004, 6:14 PM... Oct 26 2004, 10:00 PM Cloud_X QUOTE(sweetxsimplicity @ Oct 24 2004, 8:47 PM... Oct 27 2004, 12:36 AM rainnydaiis Hehe just like Mike said reminds me of my old poem... Oct 27 2004, 01:15 PM someflipguy Man most of my poems are like this....i need to po... Oct 28 2004, 07:50 AM
MasteRxKiD It's a nice, simple poem.
One of those poems t... Oct 28 2004, 03:28 PM |
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