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Ekay
post Oct 24 2004, 12:37 AM
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Now that I've had some time to cool down a bit. I can write something other then just a bunch of words put together. This explains what I feel towards my ex. Criticism is accepted.

Behind my eyes
Behind my smile
Lies a truth…

Even though I smile
Whenever I see you
Even if I look happy to see you
I never was

I’ve always tried to forget about you
Somehow you always seem to pop up in my life
Why don’t you ever leave me alone…
I…just want to forget…

Everything we ever did
Everything about you
Everything you liked
I…just want to forget



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Ekay
post Oct 24 2004, 12:58 AM
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Thanks guys. I really appreciate the feed back.
 

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Cloud_X   Forget   Oct 24 2004, 12:37 AM
EXPLO5ION   i think dats good!! i can think of a lot o...   Oct 24 2004, 12:43 AM
ryfitaDF   that's some hardcore right there. i know how y...   Oct 24 2004, 12:43 AM
Cloud_X   Thanks guys. I really appreciate the feed back.   Oct 24 2004, 12:58 AM


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