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Somber Dysphoria |
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Here's another piece I wrote during my government lecture.. Umm, I don't like it, again... but I suppose it is okay... It's definitely not one of my best... well, at least I don't think so... but, ehh.. Yeah... I'm going to stop writing during classes where it's loud and I can't concentrate... Because each time I do... I'm not fully satisfied with what I have done.
--Nick gave me a title... // my mind was blank. Somber Dysphoria The clouds above her crowded her mind where they became intertwined with her thoughts; dark and damp. They were folding; breaking… overlapping what ran through a course in her head. They cascaded down upon them and flooded the room. The room where she dwelled… and thoughts were questioned. Clouds continued to pour their soft song, beating down on the river of confusion which paraded around her. Adding more and more… drop by drop...Becoming more of a pain from the misery that mocked her. Pieces of the beauty within the words remained… as parts of the fragments built up. And they continued to tear her apart, crashing down the wall in her beautiful mind. There was a bitter haunting of the things she once repressed, things she buried in the inner depths of her mind… but the clouds have cleared; now… freeing her from her mind, freeing her from an accustomed pain and familiar regret. |
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Mel you are amazing
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