Stand in the rain |
Stand in the rain |
Oct 20 2004, 04:18 PM
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I was going to post this as a Createblog Diary entry, but it snowballed into what's before you, so I guess I'll post it up here instead. It's raining here in LA (we've recently invited a storm) and with depression slowing my pace to the front gate of my house only 15 minutes ago , I stood in the rain, and enjoyed what would soon become the inspiration for this.
--- Stand in the Rain I will stand in the rain Face up, Eyes closed, Welcoming arms, Solemn smile on my face, Hoping it will wash all of it away. Numb from pain, only the slow falling droplets and trickling down my face remind me that I am here. Unknowing to whether or not the streams rolling down my cheeks are tears from the sky or from the heart, I flood myself. Wet earth and asphalt fill the air as remorse and bewilderment fill my vulnerable body. I will stand in the rain, Victim to a thousand bullets from the merciless clouds, Hero to a battle meant to be lost. |
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Oct 20 2004, 11:15 PM
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QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 20 2004, 3:38 PM) haha, wow, it just started raining too :x I knew it would. That is exactly why I said what I said. P.S. - I'm watching you. --- QUOTE "And that'll be the day I will cry tears of happiness and the sky would take over and pour down in a sweet bliss all around me... throwing itself onto the street which surrounds us... .... that'll be the day we will dance, love." <33333 Aww babe, I love you! But...no comments for the poem? Fine. |
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MasteRxKiD Stand in the rain Oct 20 2004, 04:18 PM
dreamerOi i love this poem. i was doing something like that ... Oct 20 2004, 04:46 PM
MasteRxKiD Yeah, I love it. I absolutely adore the rain.
I... Oct 20 2004, 05:08 PM
Heathasm this really picks up after the first stanza
QUOTE... Oct 20 2004, 05:32 PM
dreamerOi same here with the whole rain thing. all i know is... Oct 20 2004, 05:34 PM
MasteRxKiD QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 20 2004, 2:32 PM)Wonderf... Oct 20 2004, 05:53 PM
Heathasm haha, wow, it just started raining too :x Oct 20 2004, 06:38 PM
omg_melface "And that'll be the day I will cry tears ... Oct 20 2004, 08:54 PM
omg_melface cb is gay sometimes...
sorry, double post. Oct 20 2004, 08:55 PM
omg_melface QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 20 2004, 10:15 PM)I kn... Oct 21 2004, 01:37 PM
MasteRxKiD I can't help it, it's this unique feeling ... Oct 21 2004, 04:29 PM
Heathasm QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 20 2004, 11:15 PM)I kn... Oct 21 2004, 04:47 PM
MasteRxKiD QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 21 2004, 1:47 PM)my suge... Oct 21 2004, 05:16 PM
waccoon QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Oct 21 2004, 6:16 PM)Yeah,... Oct 22 2004, 10:22 PM
jambaJUICE QUOTE(Heathasm @ Oct 20 2004, 5:32 PM)this re... Oct 24 2004, 03:47 PM![]() ![]() |